The Query Letter
A query letter is a short, single-spaced, one-page letter that pitches your romance novel to a prospective agent or editor. Basically, it's a sales letter. Rather than a life insurance policy or a new computer system, the product you're trying to sell is your novel … and you, the author.
Some authors write queries in the same tone or style as their novel. In other words, if their book is funny, their query letter will be funny. Other authors are more comfortable with writing a business-letter type of query. Generally, the best approach for you is the one that feels most comfortable for you.
That said, a good query letter should have the following elements:
The correct name and title of the addressee
A strong hook for your novel
A brief description of the book's main characters and conflict
The book's title, word count, and subgenre
Your publishing credentials, if any
Your name and contact info (usually in your letterhead or signature block)
SASE (Self-Addressed Stamped Envelope for their reply)
Agents and editors see thousands of query letters each year. What they want to see — actually,
If you're a new writer, you probably won't have writing credits to include in the paragraph about your publishing credentials. Instead, mention your membership in writing organizations, such as Romance Writers of America, any writing workshops or classes you may have taken or awards you may have won from unpublished writing contests. All of these prove your commitment to the craft of writing.
For more information about what to include — and how to obtain — publishing credentials for your query letter, refer to Chapter 22.
Assume that you've written a single-title romantic comedy that you want to pitch to an agent. The text of your query letter might read as follows:
Some writers prefer to open their query letters with a more straightforward pitch, followed by the plot description, such as:
The specific approach you use isn't as important as making certain that your query letter contains all of the things the agent or editor will need to know about your romance novel before she can make a decision about requesting to read your manuscript.

